Satans African Goddess, Serious Application.

This was a serious application, so if you want to make fun of me and say its a "Joke Application." go for it. I don't see how I was being unseriousness during this Application. Don't judge a title.


Steam Name:Satan
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:46949564
Steam Profile Link:http://steamcommunity.com/id/naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaail/
Age: 16
Rp Experience:Six Years
How did you stumble upon our server?:I know you guys.
Tell me a cool Mass Effect Fact: Krogans have a extra of every Organ. Two Hearts, Four Lungs.

Character Name: Zakiya Mandisa
Character Race:Human
Why did you choose this race?: Master Race, duh.
Age:31
What can your character do for our ship? (Muscle, Maintenance, Triggerman, Comedic Act, etc.): Cybernetic Specialist.
Character Equipment: M3 Predator, Cybernetic Tools for her job(IE Attaching; Prothestics, Repairing them and modifying them.) Moral Alignment: CN(See Chart)
Strengths: Knowledge of Medical, Engineering and Cybernetics.
Weaknesses: Physically Weak, Insomnia, Workaholic, Inability to add Military/Weapon Modifications onto Prothestics.
Character Backstory a.ka. how or why are you here (One paragraph minimum, be creative!):

Zakiya Mandisa was born in Cape Town, South Africa on 2155 to a fairly poverty stricken Family. Though poverty stricken Zakiya would continue to push herself to the max through her schooling and coming to climb to the top of her studies. Hoping to get herself out of the poverty she lived in and bring a bit of wealth into her family. Topping the charts within her schools through her dedicated hard-work Zakiya would graduate from her local high-school at the age of Seventeen. Due to her high GPA and hard work she was offered a scholarship into a Prestige University where she would begin her studies into Engineering, Medical and Cybernetic Advancements.

At the Age of Twenty-Five Zakiya Mandisa would graduate with her degrees moving forward with her life. Landing a well paying Job within the System Alliance she would continue her work as a Cybernetic Replacements on the wounded Soldiers and Civilians that would find their way into the Hospitals. Though she would only stay in a area for a small time before moving on with the Alliance. The Years would pass until she would find herself stationed on the Citadel during the Geth attack. Having a influx of Cybernetic Replacements and Medical treatment would drive her to the point of realization.  After the time is done she would find herself leaving the Alliance System and going to find work in a different area. Tired of moving place to place she would wish to see the rest of the Universe. Finding her way through a few people she would secure her placement aboard a Old Frigate by the name of the Geisha. Because every place that has a crew with cybernetics requires someones to replace, fix or actually place them onto the person. Right? ...Right?!

Please fix the OOC, then we'll take a lookie at the app!

Done.

I understand that this has no point towards the application above, BUT! This application is so well involved towards how dull the announcement is.

Here's a list of some Not-Serious App Titles

List of shit:

It took 17 shit titles to make the announcement. Congrats you won E3.

Anyways aside from that, I support the app. Satan's a good roleplayer.

If we're mistaking it for a joke application, that might be a sign that it needs some work done.

That being said, your recent toxic behavior both on the server and the forums is giving me cause for concern here, so I'd like to see you take another pass at this. Tell us about her personality and how she sees the world. As it is right now the backstory only shows us the history of the character.

Oh and could you be more specific for what 'Cybernetic stuff' is?

Darkstar_TG wrote:

I understand that this has no point towards the application above, BUT! This application is so well involved towards how dull the announcement is.

Here's a list of some Not-Serious App Titles

List of shit:

It took 17 shit titles to make the announcement. Congrats you won E3.

Anyways aside from that, I support the app. Satan's a good roleplayer.

Your sarcasm isn't appreciated on the matter.

Either support or don't. Leave your OOC shit out of the process.

Filtershakes wrote:

If we're mistaking it for a joke application, that might be a sign that it needs some work done.

That being said, your recent toxic behavior both on the server and the forums is giving me cause for concern here, so I'd like to see you take another pass at this. Tell us about her personality and how she sees the world. As it is right now the backstory only shows us the history of the character.

Oh and could you be more specific for what 'Cybernetic stuff' is?

Backstory=
back·sto·ry
ˈbakˌstôrē/
noun
a history or background created for a fictional character in a motion picture or television program.

Cybernetic Stuff=The things to work on cybernetic.

Toxic Action on the server? You mean my RP? Or me being a sarcastic asshole?

Lord Commander Satan wrote:

Filtershakes wrote:

If we're mistaking it for a joke application, that might be a sign that it needs some work done.

That being said, your recent toxic behavior both on the server and the forums is giving me cause for concern here, so I'd like to see you take another pass at this. Tell us about her personality and how she sees the world. As it is right now the backstory only shows us the history of the character.

Oh and could you be more specific for what 'Cybernetic stuff' is?

Backstory=
back·sto·ry
ˈbakˌstôrē/
noun
a history or background created for a fictional character in a motion picture or television program.

Cybernetic Stuff=The things to work on cybernetic.

Toxic Action on the server? You mean my RP? Or me being a sarcastic asshole?

The sarcasm- a little is ok but it's getting to be too much.

And please, no tautologies for a definition of 'cybernetic stuff'. What did you have in mind for their cybernetics?

The tools required to repair, maintain, clean, and even place onto bodies if needed.

Lord Commander Satan wrote:

The tools required to repair, maintain, clean, and even place onto bodies if needed.

Could you be more specific? I still don't understand what you have in mind here.

My Character is a Cybernetic Specalist. She works with them, keeps them well kept and if someone needs to have one put onto their body /she/ can do that. It's the tools required to do, which is probably a vast majority of items. Seeing as Mass Effects Lore on Cybernetics is close to none I can't get exact names on it.

The "Cybernetic Stuff!" are the things required to do her job.

Lord Commander Satan wrote:

My Character is a Cybernetic Specalist. She works with them, keeps them well kept and if someone needs to have one put onto their body /she/ can do that. It's the tools required to do, which is probably a vast majority of items. Seeing as Mass Effects Lore on Cybernetics is close to none I can't get exact names on it.

The "Cybernetic Stuff!" are the things required to do her job.

I'd still like you to be more specific with what cybernetic stuff means. It's vague enough that what abilities it might cover are too numerous.

Cybernetic Stuff, the Stuff required.
Wires, Torches, circuits, the prosthetic themselves.

Lord Commander Satan wrote:

This was a serious application, so if you want to make fun of me and say its a "Joke Application." go for it. I don't see how I was being unseriousness during this Application. Don't judge a title.


Steam Name:Satan
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:46949564
Steam Profile Link:http://steamcommunity.com/id/naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaail/
Age: 16
Rp Experience:Six Years
How did you stumble upon our server?:I know you guys.
Tell me a cool Mass Effect Fact: Krogans have a extra of every Organ. Two Hearts, Four Lungs.

Character Name: Zakiya Mandisa
Character Race:Human
Why did you choose this race?: Master Race, duh.
Age:31
What can your character do for our ship? (Muscle, Maintenance, Triggerman, Comedic Act, etc.): Cybernetic Specialist.
Character Equipment: M3 Predator, Cybernetic Tools for her job(IE Attaching; Prothestics, Repairing them and modifying them.) Moral Alignment: CN(See Chart)
Strengths: Knowledge of Medical, Engineering and Cybernetics.
Weaknesses: Physically Weak, Insomnia, Workaholic, Inability to add Military/Weapon Modifications onto Prothestics.
Character Backstory a.ka. how or why are you here (One paragraph minimum, be creative!):

Zakiya Mandisa was born in Cape Town, South Africa on 2155 to a fairly poverty stricken Family. Though poverty stricken Zakiya would continue to push herself to the max through her schooling and coming to climb to the top of her studies. Hoping to get herself out of the poverty she lived in and bring a bit of wealth into her family. Topping the charts within her schools through her dedicated hard-work Zakiya would graduate from her local high-school at the age of Seventeen. Due to her high GPA and hard work she was offered a scholarship into a Prestige University where she would begin her studies into Engineering, Medical and Cybernetic Advancements.

At the Age of Twenty-Five Zakiya Mandisa would graduate with her degrees moving forward with her life. Landing a well paying Job within the System Alliance she would continue her work as a Cybernetic Replacements on the wounded Soldiers and Civilians that would find their way into the Hospitals. Though she would only stay in a area for a small time before moving on with the Alliance. The Years would pass until she would find herself stationed on the Citadel during the Geth attack. Having a influx of Cybernetic Replacements and Medical treatment would drive her to the point of realization.  After the time is done she would find herself leaving the Alliance System and going to find work in a different area. Tired of moving place to place she would wish to see the rest of the Universe. Finding her way through a few people she would secure her placement aboard a Old Frigate by the name of the Geisha. Because every place that has a crew with cybernetics requires someones to replace, fix or actually place them onto the person. Right? ...Right?!

Accepted, but on very thin ice. If there's any confirmed reports about any overpowered shenanigans from this non-combat character, or any weapon mods being added and it's ban time.