Revenant's ohboywhatagoy application

Steam Name: Revenant

Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:5072715

Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/id/ADVENTMEC/

Age: 18

Rp Experience: No seriously, a lot. I don't remember all of it.

How did you stumble upon our server?: Legion told me about it.

Tell me a cool Mass Effect Fact: The turian imperial anthem is called "Die for the Cause."


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Character Name: Dexidia Tantis

Character Race: Turian

Why did you choose this race?: I've never played a Turian before and I've always been fond of them so now is my time to shine.

Age: 30

What can your character do for our ship?: Anti-Armour/Anti-Air specialist, General Infantryman, Novice Writer/Scribe

Character Equipment: Repainted Medium Guardian Armor, Notepad and Pens

Moral Alignment: Chaotic Good

Strengths: Military experience, Heavy Weapons Operation & Maintenance Training, Firm Beliefs & Convictions, Creative & Attentive

Weaknesses: Selfless, Obsessive to detail, Overly protective of the weak, the wounded or people close to her, Over-working even when feeling tired, stressed or otherwise. Mental afflictions due to overworking for a collective period of time, such as tiredness and anxiety

Character Backstory a.ka. how or why are you here:

Born on Palaven, Dexidia was born and raised as a regular Turian on the home planet of her race. Her upbringing was standard but healthy, preparing her for the conscription that she would no doubt undertake when she was of suitable age. At the time when Dexidia reached the age of fifteen, like most if not all of her race, Dexidia was sent to boot camp to begin her training to serve her mandatory service in the Turian military. Learning the skills she needed to serve over the year of training that she had received, Dexidia had become specialized with heavy weapons; particularly the ML-77 Missile Launcher in order to engage both air and ground armored targets, making her a threat to more than just regular infantry. She would be assigned to a field unit and began her service within the ranks of the Turian 52nd Light Infantry; tasked with patrolling Citadel Controlled Space and dealing with threats to not only Palaven and Turian territory but to the colonies of the other Council races.

She'd serve valiant over eleven years before resigning to find a more independent lifestyle to suit her desires, having fulfilled her service to the Hierarchy with both honor and distinction. She'd spend a year swapping from job to job to find something that she both enjoyed and enabled her to be independent yet still enabled her to follow her beliefs and help those in need or unable to fend for themselves.

I'm not feeling good with this backstory so I'll probably re-write or revise at some later time.
Other than that, feel free to give me pointers or whatever.
Or rip into me why not.

Offering actual criticism, the weaknesses seem to be a little weak. They seem to just be "too good" and "works too much". I'd recommend giving her legitimate issues with her mental or physical state.

Was just trying to think of that, seeing as I'm sure that the character was still physically and mentally able to serve as part of the crew rather than be weakened in some way, which is why I tried to give her vices and flaws in regards to how she presents herself when given particular situations. I do get your point though and I'll try and add something along those lines.

+Support. I know Revenant and he could honestly roleplay a character such as this extremely well!

Change your OOC info to something less stupid.

I really cannot take any of you seriously when you do this shit.

I only really put it there because I've already got one app with all of that information already on it but you got it mister boss man, already changed.

Not the point, you put in your info and you make it look smart.

No one's going to be willing to accept it if you don't act serious. Thanks for changing it.

Looks good to me!

Will approve of this, do me proud.